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February 15, 2013
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Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
E-PL1
Shutter Speed
1/80 second
Aperture
F/3.9
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
1600
Date Taken
Feb 20, 2012, 12:56:52 PM
Software
Version 1.1
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No Title by laalart No Title by laalart
Acrylic On Canvas Size 80x30 cm
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:iconlalagabrysia:
I don't know how constructive this critique is going to be, because there's really nothing that I dislike about this painting. I think it's very cool how you repeated the circle shape in three different ways (spiral, sphere, and ray). Clever.

What really gets me is the layering. It keeps the piece from looking too flat. It also creates a sense of depth. It ALSO adds more visual interest because of the variety of scale, and that was the reason that I zoomed in on the image to get a closer look.

Personally, I love when people play with a primary color scheme. Did you notice how you've got a repetition of 3s going on? Three primary colors, three kinds of circle, three spiral shapes. The painting is almost three times as long as it is wide. Also, it takes three points to make a circle (yay geometry). Maybe I'm just a conspiracy theorist, haha.

Anyway, I chose to critique this piece because successful nonobjective paintings make me happy. Good work!
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:iconinthestarrynightsky:
InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
This is really neat. Nice job.
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:iconlaalart:
laalart Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thank You <3
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:iconinthestarrynightsky:
InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
You're welcome. :aww:
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GiantMuffinRabbit869 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The design looks great it sort of reminds me of chemistry with the molecules and atoms.
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:iconlaalart:
laalart Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thanx for your thoughts about my artwork <3
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:iconmandinga91:
Mandinga91 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
great deviation..the circles make the composition so interesting!
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:iconlaalart:
laalart Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thank You <3
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:iconsamanthajordaan:
SamanthaJordaan Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013   Traditional Artist
Nice vice:-)
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:iconlaalart:
laalart Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thanxxx <3
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Kecgirl Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
Wow, not bad...
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